C4K #5 #6 #7 Summary & comments

 Ariel's Blog 
March
Summary:
In this post Ariel gives great advice to incoming freshmen. She advises them to do all of the work that is assigned to them. Ariel informs the freshmen to listen to their teachers and avoid negative peer pressure. She also says that it's good to participate in school activities. Last but certainly not least, Ariel suggests that the freshmen should make friends.  
Comment:
This is a great post Ariel. You gave a lot of insight into what high school is. You also made great points on what to do in high school. I completely agree with your points. These points will be helpful to incoming freshmen. Great post Ariel!

AJ's Blog
Summary:
AJ's post is about the NFL's "no catch rule." He writes about whether or not this rule should be banned or kept. AJ believes that the rule should be banned. I can't agree or disagree because I have no idea of what this rule means nor do I watch football.

Comment:
The topic of your post gives a great argument, but your grammar needs work. Great post! Keep up the good work.

Joey's Blog
Summary:
Joey's blog is about whether or not first impressions are accurate. Joey believes that first impressions are not accurate. He makes a comparison to a book and how the cover looks amazing but the book's content is boring. He makes a claim that first impressions are not accurate because you don't know that person or object.

Comment:
This is a great post that I completely agree with. The only problem is that there are grammatical errors that need to be fixed. Overall, the post is great! Keep up the good work.